Online services Activity 4 exchanging documents by email (communiction)

Today i completed activity 4! This involved me sending an email to other people in my group with a link to my blog!!

The email I sent was

From: Rebecca RIPPIN (Boston High School) Sent: 13 September 2006 09:40To: Rosie STONE (Boston High School); Samantha THORLEY (Boston High School); Max HALLETT (Boston High School); Sophie KEEBLE (Boston High School)Subject: my new blog

Just letting you no I have made a blogger account!! The address is http://beccirippin.blogspot.com/!!
Could you visit it please telling me what you think!! Let me know if you want me to review your blog!!
Lv becci x.x.x.x

I have recieved 6 emails with peoples blog addresses on them.

I have placed screen shots and copies of my emails in a file called 'activity 4 emails'. The responses I have recieved have all been good! I think people liked my blog. In order to have got more constructive criticism I think I could have made my emails more detailed possibly asking how I could have made my blog better. In order to try and solve this problem I am going to email some more people asking this time for feedback and critiscism. To sure the changes that people suggest I am going to put a before and after screen shot on my blog.








This was an email i received suggesting things that I coudl change.
Sophie suggested that I made my text slightly bigger and used a more interesting font. I have therefore taken my two screen shots showing the changes before and after Sophies suggestions.




This was what my blog looked like before.

This is a screen shot of my blog after comments from other members of my group of how I could improve it. I'm stll not entially happy with the the deisgn and still feel thar improvements could made.